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the official blog of group #3
Saturday, November 19, 2011
Wednesday, November 16, 2011
Saturday, November 12, 2011
Blog Post #8
Thursday, November 10, 2011
blog post 8
Domestic violence Against Women
This topic is a relevant topic because so many families in USA are affect by this kind of violence in their home. So many research has been done on this kind of issue and many scholars come up with solution, but yet domestic violence still exist even more than before. In my opinion this topic is a good topic because this kind of situation has an influence on everyone’s life in different ways. Some may be a victim to violence years ago or still is in an abusive situation. Others may know individual who has experienced or is experiencing violence. Some of the audience may tired of abusive relationship of their neighbor. This paper will give information on how to help those individual in danger by this kind of violence. I think this paper will give an insight about children and our communities’ affection by domestic violence. This will change the perception of the society against child with some kind of odd behavior because of parents fight. Instead it will initiate the reader to help those children who are the victim of the violence. So, to meet the essential target, how the paper appears to readers is what really matter. This topic should be presented in persuasive manner. To do so, the narrative should include relevant statistics and research papers that would be the evidence to the general idea. Moreover, I will approach my paper in an organized fashion; this will help me stay in control. This will allow my readers to stay focus so that they finish the reading the paper and take action to give a hand to those affected by domestic violence.
Sunday, November 6, 2011
Blog #7
Thursday, November 3, 2011
blog post #7
This class helped me to improve my writing skill in many ways. I learned how to complicate the idea. Free writing is new technic I learned from this class. Before I try to write a good paper once which results in bad paper most time but now this new technics that I got from this class makes it easy for me to write a good paper. My bad attitude against writing completely changed. Now I think I can generate idea and complicate it. Blog post, comment on blog post and other gives me a chance to share new thoughts and to read classmates thought. In general this quarter is three hundred sixty turn from negative attitude of to positive about writing. For me that is the complete turn from non sense to credible value. Plan, then write a best way that I am comfortable with to complicate my paper. Before I feel pressure deep into my heart when I think about planning but now I plan before I start writing without feeling fear.
My first plan to extend my five page paper to eight page is to target at the comment my teacher gave me. Developing complicated thesis statement and topic sentence. The last technic I think to complicate the paper I will adda more evidence that increase the tension in my paper. The other very challenged me is to come up with the topic that could get attention of my reader. Topic is the first thing the readers in counter with before body of the paper so it should be better or more attractive to reader.
Tuesday, October 25, 2011
It looks like the comedy is funny, but this comedy show have a great message for those who can understand it. In this movie, the families are fighting on an issue. What the family doesn’t realize is the effect that it has on there kid. The wife was complaining that her kids are not listening her. In my opinion, they are not listening to her because the mother is not being responsible. When parents do not take the responsibilities for their children as an adult, children will take control in thing they do. There are three things I point out in the movie that contained irresponsible action. The first thing would be the irresponsibility of the husband. The husband is not working for his family to provide the families need as well as helping around the house chores. This is an indication to the audience that this family is going through. The second message that is included in this episode was the children’s behavior outside their home. The history teacher was discussing about child. Children who tend to have problems at home will often affect how they perform in school. When child’s mother is presented with her the child’s problem she does not want to admit the problem. Instead she argues that the problem the teacher rise is not right. At this point she is showing that the problem the child has is unsolvable without a corporation from the parents. In my opinion, the mother knows that her husband is not providing what is needed for their children while she’s away working in the factory. The third most relevant point that the comedy has was about social class. It shows how working class struggles to sustain their life.