Blog #7

This is a difficult paper to write. Bringing everything together in a smooth transaction is one of the harder things I find to do. Although I think I've done alright so far with what I have, and this is my first writing class since high school. I believe that this paper would be better in a couple ways. One would be if I had more education thus far. Not saying that it plays a big role, I feel just a little bit amateur. Two would be understanding the material a bit more and being more analytical with a not so much opinionated voice which is hard for me to keep in check. All in all i think that I did an okay job, however, I always self criticize to the extreme.